Second Visit

Today Mr Bishop listened to our stories and gave each of us some good ideas about what we could do to make them better.   My story is about a man who made a garden and then an alien swapped their garden with his.  The edible garden became a monster and  the man began to fight back but he needed a friend.  His friend was called Jeffro and together they eat the monster which then turns back into the garden.  That is all I have written so far and I am going to finish it before Mr Bishop returns on Friday.

Mr Bishop also showed his storyboard and a dummy book which was really interesting.  

It is great to have an author like Mr Bishop at our school because he gives us ideas about what to write.

From Ah-Li

We had a busy day in the Tutor room on Monday with Gavin where the children shared their stories and began the editing process.  The children have learnt the importance of extending their ideas about characters and revisiting their writing to make sure their ideas flow.

It was a great session and the children look forward to Gavin's visit on Friday.

Judy Parry