Feedback from our stories

Last week Gavin Bishop came and  listened to our stories and gave us feedback plus ideas.  He helped each of us with our story that we have been writing about our edible garden.  We are going to publish a book with Gavin Bishop's help. We are now going to  try to put two stories together by two class members Ah li and Timoteo.  

Mr Bishop also shared some stories by Joy Cowley that he is going to illustrate for her.  The stories  were really exciting and fantastic because they had a lot of interesting words and words that rhyme.   It was a real hoot and we had a good laugh. 

Liam and Cecil

A great session where the children enjoyed sharing their stories and getting ideas about how to improve their story.  A lot of the children have realised that they need to look at their flow of ideas and extend ideas when describing a character.

The children will now work on combining two stories together - which will be a very interesting process.

Judy Parry

Room 3