“Ko Whangakopoikipiko ahau. Ko tenei taku pūrakau.”
“I am Whangakopikipiko. This is my story.”
“I am Whangakopikipiko. This is my story.”
Our Waiotahe Valley School pupils bask in the limelight of the CORE Team today while staying centred on revising and reworking aspects of their writing.Jahnika Timmins discussing the planning and drafting stages of his story with the CORE film crew.
The review process between Des and the students continued throughout the morning. Again Des gave in depth individualised, specific feed back to the students. Students were beginning to move their pen and paper written stories onto electronic technology.
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